The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago, and how it appears now. Summarize the information, report the main features, and make comparisons wherever relevant.

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The maps illustrate the public library's layout 20 years ago and today.

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, the are several noticeable things including changing

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the central of

building

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the building

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, adding some new facilities and resizing

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areas. Looking at the information in detail, in

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20 years, there

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a couple of tables with chairs in the middle of

library

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the library

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Then

, in the new design, these have been removed.

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, information desk and

self service

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machines are now available on the right side.

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visitors nowadays can enjoy their time in the cafe located opposite

lecture

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the lecture

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room

. Central library 20 years ago had a

room

for CDs, videos and computer games.

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room

then

becomes larger and the previous sections

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unavailable. Today,

this

room

is used for storytelling events and children's fiction books with two sofas in several corners of

room

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the room

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. The only section which seen no change is the location of

entrance

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the entrance

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