The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago, and how it appears now. Summarize the information, report the main features, and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago, and how it appears now. Summarize the information, report the main features, and make comparisons wherever relevant.
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The maps illustrate the public library's layout 20 years ago and today.
Overall
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, the are several noticeable things including changing
in
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the central of
building
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the building
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, adding some new facilities and resizing
of
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areas. Looking at the information in detail, in
previous
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the previous
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20 years, there
is
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a couple of tables with chairs in the middle of
library
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the library
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.
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, in the new design, these have been removed.
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, information desk and
self service
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machines are now available on the right side.
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,
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visitors nowadays can enjoy their time in the cafe located opposite
lecture
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the lecture
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room
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. Central library 20 years ago had a
room
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for CDs, videos and computer games.
This
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room
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then
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becomes larger and the previous sections
is
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unavailable. Today,
this
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room
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is used for storytelling events and children's fiction books with two sofas in several corners of
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room
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the room
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. The only section which seen no change is the location of
entrance
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the entrance
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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