The map below shows the development of the museum between 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the museum between 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how the
museum
developed from 2010 to 2012.
Overall
, the historic site witnessed significant changes in the east.
In addition
, the facility in the
museum
was expanded. In 2010, the door was placed in position to the south of the
museum
. On the opposite, there was a lobby leading to the Hall of Ocean location,
while
the ticket desk was located on the left. From the southwest, there were dinosaurs and
mammals
. there are many trees in the garden to the east of the
museum
. Three years later, the
center
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location from the entrance to the lobby is kept intact as the origin, in contact with the Ocaen hall was narrow. In the west, the dinosaurs remained but the
mammals
were replaced by the ice age and adding insects between the ice age and the dinosaurs. A number of trees were cleared to modernize in the east, and in their place was a new cafe near the shop. the
mammals
were relocated from west to east, and the new human origins display was located between the cafe and the
mammals
.
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