The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the
percentage
of
people
living in countries
such
as the Philippines, Malaysia,
Thailand
and
Indonesia
over a 70-year period. In general, Malaysia has shown the most growth.
Whereas
Thailand
has had the least . Starting from the beginning of 1970 we can see a good trend of increasing
percentage
of
people
in urban areas. But in 1990 the
percentage
of Filipinos started to fall slightly. By the year
2000
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Indonesia
and
Thailand
had equalized, because the latter’s percentages did not change.
Indonesia
continued to grow steadily and by 2010 they were already equal to the Philippines. In the same year, the Philippines again began to increase the
percentage
of
people
in the city.
According to
forecasts for 2024 to 2040,
people
will not stop moving to cities and the
percentage
will continue to grow. The biggest dynamics is seen in Malaysia with more than 54% which should reach 84% by 2040, not far behind
Indonesia
with about 44%. And the smallest increase is in
Thailand
with only 30
percent
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per cent
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.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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