The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given graph illustrates the usage of three types of jam in an Asian country between 1991 and 2014. Units are measured in
grams
.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that butter
became the largest consumption of jam types in the first decade, while
low fat and reduced spreads leading
the position eventually in the six Wrong verb form
led
last
years.
In terms of butter
, in 1981, the consumption of butter
was
stood at 140 Unnecessary verb
apply
grams
, higher than others. It then
saw a slight increase to 160 grams
in the next five years. However
, it significantly dropped throughout the last
period and hitting
a trough at about 50 Wrong verb form
hit
grams
.
Regarding others, the usage of margarine stood at just below 100 grams
in 1981, which it
declined slightly to 80 Correct pronoun usage
apply
grams
in 1986. It then
had a notable rise at precisely 100 grams
and started to surpass the butter
usage. Between 1991 and 1996, margarine consumptions
remained stable, before dropping at exactly 40 Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
grams
in 2007. Conversely
, low fat and reduced spreads, which started in 1996 was at the lowest point, around 10 grams
, and it soared significantly to 80 grams
in 2001 and experienced a slight decrease by around 10 grams
in
the end of the period.Change the preposition
at
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, butter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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