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The tables below give information about sales of coffee and bananas in 1990 and 2004 in five European countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The tables below give information about sales of coffee and bananas in 1990 and 2004 in five European countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The given table depicts data about
sales
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 of
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coffee
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 and
bananas
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 in 1999 and 2004 in the UK, Switzerland, Belgium, Sweden, and
Denmark
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.
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, the consumption of
coffee
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 increased in every country;
however
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, the popularity of
bananas
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 did not grow in all five states. Looking at the details, the
sales
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 of
coffee
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 soared in the UK, increasing from 1.5 to 20
million
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euros
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. The second significant increase was in Switzerland, where
sales
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 doubled from 3
million
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euros
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. Belgium shown rose by 0,7
million
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euros
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, which
equaled
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to
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1,7
million
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euros
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 in 2005. Consumers in
Denmark
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 and
Sweeden
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Sweden
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 spent on
coffee
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 in 2005 year 0,2
million
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euro
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 more in every country, than they did in 1999, which
were
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was
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 1.8 and 0.8
million
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euros
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. The discrepancy of money spent on
bananas
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 was different in
mentioned
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the mentioned
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 above countries.
For instance
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, Switzerland, the UK and Belgium had had
essencial
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essential
 decrease from 15 to 47, from 1 to 5,5, and from 0.6 to 4
million
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euros
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 respectively. The contrast trend was shown in Sweden and
Denmark
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, where the
sales
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 of
bananas
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 decreased by 0.2
millions
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million
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 in
Sweeden
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Sweden
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 and by 1.1
million
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 in
Denmark
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, denmark, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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