The tables below give information about sales of coffee and bananas in 1990 and 2004 in five European countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The tables below give information about sales of coffee and bananas in 1990 and 2004 in five European countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The given table depicts data about
sales
of
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coffee
and
bananas
in 1999 and 2004 in the UK, Switzerland, Belgium, Sweden, and
Denmark
.
Overall
, the consumption of
coffee
increased in every country;
however
, the popularity of
bananas
did not grow in all five states. Looking at the details, the
sales
of
coffee
soared in the UK, increasing from 1.5 to 20
million
euros
. The second significant increase was in Switzerland, where
sales
doubled from 3
million
euros
. Belgium shown rose by 0,7
million
euros
, which
equaled
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to
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1,7
million
euros
in 2005. Consumers in
Denmark
and
Sweeden
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Sweden
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spent on
coffee
in 2005 year 0,2
million
euro
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more in every country, than they did in 1999, which
were
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1.8 and 0.8
million
euros
. The discrepancy of money spent on
bananas
was different in
mentioned
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the mentioned
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above countries.
For instance
, Switzerland, the UK and Belgium had had
essencial
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essential
decrease from 15 to 47, from 1 to 5,5, and from 0.6 to 4
million
euros
respectively. The contrast trend was shown in Sweden and
Denmark
, where the
sales
of
bananas
decreased by 0.2
millions
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million
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in
Sweeden
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Sweden
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and by 1.1
million
in
Denmark
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, denmark, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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