The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart presents the
amount
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of
money
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that is
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used for both spent and received at children's charity
that
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apply
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located in the United States in 2016.
Overall
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, the total
amount
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both
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of both
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revenue and spent are in the same range. It is obvious that almost all of
received
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the received
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come
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comes
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from population-donated food for children.
In contrast
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, the most expenditures
is
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are
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for the program and
also
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facilities. The
amount
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of
money
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are
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is
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received to take care of their children, the vast majority of donors support food 68.8 per
cent
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.
In addition
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, there
are
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is
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a fewer part that comes from the government, investment, communities and other income, the total is only 15.2 per
cent
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. No one can deny that
they're
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they also have
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also
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have to spend
money
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too. It is
obviously
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obvious
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that a huge of
money
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is paid to program services 95.8 per
cent
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.
Besides
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that, the charity
also
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uses the
amount
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of
money
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for fundraising, management and general at the same time, respectively 2.6,
1.6
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and 1.6
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per
cent
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, money, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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