The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart presents the
amount
of money
that is
used for both spent and received at children's charity that
located in the United States in 2016.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Overall
, the total amount
both
revenue and spent are in the same range. It is obvious that almost all of Change preposition
of both
received
Correct article usage
the received
come
from population-donated food for children. Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
In contrast
, the most expenditures is
for the program and Change the verb form
are
also
facilities.
The amount
of money
are
received to take care of their children, the vast majority of donors support food 68.8 per Change the verb form
is
cent
. In addition
, there are
a fewer part that comes from the government, investment, communities and other income, the total is only 15.2 per Change the verb form
is
cent
.
No one can deny that they're
Change the verb form
they also have
also
have to spend money
too. It is obviously
that a huge of Change the word
obvious
money
is paid to program services 95.8 per cent
. Besides
that, the charity also
uses the amount
of money
for fundraising, management and general at the same time, respectively 2.6, 1.6
per Correct word choice
and 1.6
cent
.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, money, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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