The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to the present time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words
The maps illustrate how a
school
's condition transformed in 1985 (with 1500 students) and now (with 2300 students).
Overall
, the major change is the increased number of classrooms
with a reduced area of playing field and road
. Additional learning facilities and trees also
exhibited in the present time.
In 1985, the entrance and exit Add a missing verb
are also
road
was laid on the north side
and it ran to the south to the school
's playing fields. There was a small car park adjacent to the road
, and small classrooms
and classroom blocks (2 storeys) were on each side
of the road
. Then
, there was a large library on the western of the small classroom. Large playing fields were located in the southern area of the school
.
As the student population grows in the present time, the road
in school
is diminished and replaced by trees. While
the small car park disappears, there is a new block of classrooms
and an additional 1 storey of classrooms
on the east side
. On the western side
, there are new facilities, they are learning sources centres (which consist of a computer room), a pool, and a fitness centre, By introducing these facilities, the playing fields are also
shrinking.Submitted by chocolate10
on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, classrooms, road, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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