The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to the present time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words

The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to the present time.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

You should write at least 150 words
The maps illustrate how a
school
's condition transformed in 1985 (with 1500 students) and now (with 2300 students).
Overall
, the major change is the increased number of
classrooms
with a reduced area of playing field and
road
. Additional learning facilities and trees
also
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exhibited in the present time. In 1985, the entrance and exit
road
was laid on the north
side
and it ran to the south to the
school
's playing fields. There was a small car park adjacent to the
road
, and small
classrooms
and classroom blocks (2 storeys) were on each
side
of the
road
.
Then
, there was a large library on the western of the small classroom. Large playing fields were located in the southern area of the
school
. As the student population grows in the present time, the
road
in
school
is diminished and replaced by trees.
While
the small car park disappears, there is a new block of
classrooms
and an additional 1 storey of
classrooms
on the east
side
. On the western
side
, there are new facilities, they are learning sources centres (which consist of a computer room), a pool, and a fitness centre, By introducing these facilities, the playing fields are
also
shrinking.
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