The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to the present time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to the present time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The maps illustrate how a
school
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's condition transformed in 1985 (with 1500 students) and now (with 2300 students).
Overall
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, the major change is the increased number of
classrooms
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with a reduced area of playing field and
road
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. Additional learning facilities and trees
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also
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exhibited in the present time. In 1985, the entrance and exit
road
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was laid on the north
side
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and it ran to the south to the
school
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's playing fields. There was a small car park adjacent to the
road
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, and small
classrooms
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and classroom blocks (2 storeys) were on each
side
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of the
road
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.
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, there was a large library on the western of the small classroom. Large playing fields were located in the southern area of the
school
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. As the student population grows in the present time, the
road
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in
school
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is diminished and replaced by trees.
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the small car park disappears, there is a new block of
classrooms
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and an additional 1 storey of
classrooms
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on the east
side
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. On the western
side
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, there are new facilities, they are learning sources centres (which consist of a computer room), a pool, and a fitness centre, By introducing these facilities, the playing fields are
also
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shrinking.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school, classrooms, road, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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