The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture gives information about the proportion of Australian exports in four different countries including Japan, the US, China and India in 22
years
period from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
, it is clear that
China had the most significant increase of all.
It can be seen from the chart that in the past China used to have the second lowest percentage of people moving to Australia for work. Surprisingly, we witnessed a considerable jump to nearly 30 and reached the peak after 22 years
. Besides
that, India also
saw a slight increase from almost no exporters during the first 10-year period from 1990 to 2000 but then
up to 5.
In contrast
, Japan used to be at the top but witnessed a rapid fall to 20 in 5 years
then
slowly decreased from 20 to 16. Similarly
, the US also
had a gradual decline from 11 to 8 then
came back to the past data after 22 years
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