The maps show changes that took place in grange park over a 124 years period between 1920 and 2024.

The maps show changes that took place in grange park over a 124 years period between 1920 and 2024.
The maps illustrate how a community
park
has evolved from its opening in 1920 to its current state today.
Overall
,over the years,several significant
change
Change to a plural noun
changes
show examples
have been made to modernize the
park
and offer a wider range of activities and facilities to visitors. In 1920, the
park
was designed with classic features including a central fountain, a stage for live performances, and a glasshouse. The
park
also
contained three rose gardens and had plenty of seating arranged around the fountain and stage.
On the other hand
,today’s
park
layout
include
Change the verb form
includes
show examples
more modern elements. The original fountain has been replaced by a new rose garden with extra seating. The stage has been replaced by an
amphitheater
Change the spelling
amphitheatre
show examples
, which accommodates more people for concerts. The glasshouse has been substituted with a water feature, and the pond for aquatic plants has been transformed into a play area for children.
Furthermore
, one of the rose gardens had been transformed into a
cae
Correct your spelling
car
,offering more facilities for visitors.
Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: