Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people's lives and should receive more funding. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some may claim that the time and money that
news
companies spend on international news
are not well founded and they should instead
focus on local news
that influences people's lives more.I, however
, do not fully support this
claim.
The way I see it, although
local news
and what happens in close proxy to people definitely have a larger impact on the locals, it should be noted that by logic local news
is less important and duller in comparison to the global ones and if the media shift their focus to report more on them they surely lose viewership. Not only that by also
people get bored and stop watching the news
altogether. Hence
it is in everybody's best interest to maintain the status quo. For instance
, take a news
channel that spends 15 hours reporting on local news
such
as weather and the price of goods going up five per cent while
a major global conflict is happening somewhere else in the world. It is only logical that the latter get more time and funds. Overall
, the news
is more engaging when it is about the world.
Moreover
, reporting on international news
is naturally more expansive. For example
, a news
agency should send a reporter to the other side of the globe and spend more resources to be able to create a news
piece. Hence
if a company spend as much money on international news
as they spend on local ones they will not have the best of coverage. So, the funds should be spent in proportion.
To sum up
, I think the current way that media companies function are
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is
result
of tried and tested methods and the amount of budget they allocate to each sector is thoroughly thought out. Add an article
the result
a result
Therefore
, there is no need to change it.Submitted by parsajahan3 on
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