You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter -remind your employer what the course was about -explain why the course was useful to you in your work -suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other colleagues Begin your letter as follows: Dear ,
Dear Mr. Smith,
Thank you for letting me attend a training
course
called Management of Deteriorated Patients last
week. I am writing this
letter as my feedback on that course
. That course
was about how to manage patients in our hospital who are deteriorating and how to identify the early symptoms of deterioration. It was very helpful for me as a nurse because the explanation was detailed and easy to understand. Thanks to this
course
, I am now more confident that I can assess patients systematically.
However
, I noticed that some of my colleagues seemed to be a little confused. These people are newgraduate
nurses or physiotherapists who are not so familiar with medical terminologies. Correct your spelling
new graduate
As well as
they have not experienced in
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apply
such
acute settings yet, which is why it might have been difficult to imagine the situations that were given as examples. Thus
, it would be more suitable for medical staff that have a couple of years of experience in acute settings.
I hope this
feedback will be useful for you.
Yours faithfully,
Hiromi OkumuraSubmitted by hiromi.1828.o on
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You might consider offering specific examples of what you learned or how you are implementing new skills in your work to further strengthen your feedback.
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You could elaborate more on why the course content was difficult for less experienced staff by emphasizing specific challenging aspects.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with clear paragraphs for each point, making it easy to follow your thoughts.
task achievement
You have included all required points - reminding your employer about the course, explaining its usefulness, and suggesting why it may not be suitable for some colleagues.