The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the amounts of
air
pollution
in four different countries;
China
, America, Japan, and Australia, in the year 2012.
Overall
,
China
was the country that produced the most
air
pollution
in the three sectors; electricity generation, transport, and industry. The
air
pollution
level of the electricity sector was 15
PPM
in Japan,
while
in America, it reached a double level,
however
, it was four times that amount in
China
.
On the other hand
, the
air
pollution
in all three sectors in Australia had almost the same level; less than 20
PPM
.
However
, the industry sector, in comparison with the other sectors, had the highest amount of
air
pollution
in both
China
and Japan; 80
PPM
and 42
PPM
respectively.
On the other hand
, transport was the highest sector producing
air
pollution
in America, with about 60
PPM
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollution, china, ppm with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollution levels
  • sources of pollution
  • industrial pollution
  • transportation-related pollution
  • household pollution
  • highest levels
  • lowest levels
  • notable changes
  • anomalies
  • comparisons
  • summarise
  • highlight
  • analyze
  • chart
  • data
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