The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the amounts of
air
pollution
in four different countries; China
, America, Japan, and Australia, in the year 2012. Overall
, China
was the country that produced the most air
pollution
in the three sectors; electricity generation, transport, and industry.
The air
pollution
level of the electricity sector was 15 PPM
in Japan, while
in America, it reached a double level, however
, it was four times that amount in China
. On the other hand
, the air
pollution
in all three sectors in Australia had almost the same level; less than 20 PPM
.
However
, the industry sector, in comparison with the other sectors, had the highest amount of air
pollution
in both China
and Japan; 80 PPM
and 42 PPM
respectively. On the other hand
, transport was the highest sector producing air
pollution
in America, with about 60 PPM
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