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The pie charts shows the spending habits of people in the UK in 1971 and 2001. Summarize the information by slelcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts shows the spending habits of people in the UK in 1971 and 2001. Summarize the information by slelcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graph gives information about habits that individuals in Britain spend time on from the year 1971 until 2001. 
Overall
, reading
books
 did not
change
 a lot in
rate
, and it decreased more in 2001, and
food
 went down significantly, and the opposite cars did increase, computers showed a high amount
rate
 and in 2001 and the
rest
 did not
change
 in number much.  Starting in 1971, the highest percentage among them is
food
, and it represents 44% per
cent
 of the
rest
, almost half, next in
rate
 is cars, and it showed 22% of the
rest
,
books
 and restaurants are very close in proportion to each the restaurants are 7 per
cent
 and
books
 6 per
cent
, computers were law in
rate
 on 1971 which is just 2%. In 2001 the numbers did
change
 a lot.
First,
the highest was not
food
 and
instead
 were the cars in very different, the
food
 decreased from 44% to just 14%
on the other hand
 cras went up from 22% to 43% more than the double in number,
books
 went down and became almost 0 per
cent
 in 2001, computers increase from 2% to 12%, the
rest
 did not
change
 a lot from 1971 to 2001, and they are fixed in the
rate
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, change, rate, food, rest, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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