Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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threats to our society. Global warming is increasing earth temperatures

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problem Is cutting down trees and destroying natural habitats and forests to construct roads and buildings

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population growth. Burning fossil fuels

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renewable energy

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third world countries are using fossil fuels for their

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Introduction

Try to ensure that your introduction clearly outlines the main points you will discuss. While you did mention what will be covered, the wording could be clearer. Additionally, ensure that each body paragraph sticks to one main idea to avoid confusion.

Transition Words

To improve coherence and cohesion, use more linking words and phrases to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, words like 'Moreover,' 'Additionally,' and 'Consequently' can help keep your writing fluid and easier to read.

Examples

Provide more specific examples to back up your points. For instance, mentioning specific countries or regions where renewable energy has been successful, or statistical data on deforestation rates, would add more depth to your essay.

Word Choice

Avoid generalizations and be careful with wording. For instance, instead of 'human should try to use public transportation,' you can say, 'individuals should be encouraged to use public transportation more frequently.'

Grammar

Review your grammar and punctuation. There are several minor errors that could be easily fixed with a careful proofread. For example, 'global warming is increasing earth temperatures' should be 'global warming is increasing Earth's temperatures.'

Content

The essay addressed both causes and solutions to global warming, showing a good grasp of the topic.

Structure

You showed a willingness to discuss multiple points and provided a logical structure overall.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

295 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Climate change
Earth's atmosphere
Carbon dioxide
Methane
Nitrous oxide
Emissions
Renewable energy
Energy efficiency
Afforestation
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Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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