2.The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity. Summaries the information in the diagram to explain how the system works
The
process
diagram shows how water is made from hydroelectric power generated.
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, the electric power-making Linking Words
process
involves thirteen steps, beginning with the extraction of seawater to find the tuning reverse Use synonyms
process
and ending with the supply of the finished urban area.
First of all, the ocean is a big supplier from the electric used Use synonyms
an
electric collar. It is Correct article usage
apply
then
evaporated to water which shifts the reservoir Linking Words
process
a big dam to a gate by on and off. After the permission valve Use synonyms
then
the hydroelectric supply turbine heat exchanger to put by a pump which extracts that heat.
Once the heat exchanged turbine has been formed, they are sent to a high voltage cable to transfer by a tower. Here, they are heated in an electric transformation plantation to moderate the maintain the normal temperature. The station supply to underground cables for electric machine power stations is ready to supply to the urban area or industries.Linking Words
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