The two maps below show an island both before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the transformation of an
island
before and after Use synonyms
construction
of several tourist Correct article usage
the construction
facilities
.
Use synonyms
Initially
, the Linking Words
island
was a natural, undeveloped land mass surrounded by sea with a beach on the western side. The Use synonyms
area
was covered with Use synonyms
palm-trees
and lacked any infrastructured or man-made Correct your spelling
palm trees
structure
. The Fix the agreement mistake
structures
100 meters
Correct your spelling
100-meter
island
indicated a pristine environment untouched by human activity.
After the constructionUse synonyms
,
Change preposition
of, man-made
man-made
structure was introduced, the Add an article
the man-made
island
went through a significant development to accommodate tourists. A range of Use synonyms
facilities
Use synonyms
were
built, including the Change the verb form
was
reception
Use synonyms
area
located in the Use synonyms
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
island
, with a restaurant Use synonyms
in
the north side of the Change preposition
on
reception
Use synonyms
area
. To the west and east of the Use synonyms
reception
Use synonyms
area
, there are several accommodation units erected, with footpaths connecting the bungalows towards each other. A vehicle track was Use synonyms
also
built connecting the restaurant, Linking Words
reception
Use synonyms
area
, and the pier in the south all together. The pier Use synonyms
also
allows access on boats, increasing transportation options.
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Additionally
, the beach on the western side of the Linking Words
island
was developed into a designated swimming Use synonyms
area
. Enhancing the Use synonyms
island
’s appeal to tourists. The Use synonyms
overall
layout shows a well-planned structure of Linking Words
facilities
Use synonyms
while
still maintaining some natural features like the palm trees.
In conclusion, the development has transformed the vacant Linking Words
island
into a tourist destination with lots of Use synonyms
facilities
, Use synonyms
while
keeping the natural features.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, facilities, area, reception with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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