Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads
Some say that governments must give more money for building railways rather than
roads
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This
essay totally disagrees with that statement, because Linking Words
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people
and products like Use synonyms
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roads
.
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it is clear that
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roads
are more available for folk to go to their destination and sometimes might be even cheaper than railroads. In railways, crowds cannot bring with them so many things, when if they want to populate another home in another part of the country. Use synonyms
For example
, in China was a poll about Linking Words
this
question and approximately 80% of Linking Words
people
chose that Use synonyms
roads
are more important for them, for the reason that I mentioned.
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also
crucial for export needs like Linking Words
food
, clothes, and materials. These stuffs very necessary for all humanity and without them, they can not live just 3 days. Use synonyms
For instance
, 5 years ago, when it was time of COVID-19, I know that in my town there was no Linking Words
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in supermarkets, and it is Use synonyms
due to
all cars and tracks that transported Linking Words
food
could not go anywhere, because the government closed all Use synonyms
roads
for them.
In conclusion, some might believe that spending more money on railways will be good rather than giving it to make more qualitative Use synonyms
roads
, but I do not think so, because Use synonyms
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roads
and products that require Use synonyms
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export them with cars and tracks.Linking Words
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