Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads
Some say that governments must give more money for building railways rather than
roads
. This
essay totally disagrees with that statement, because roads
are the main transportation for people
and products like food
and clothes are exported mostly on the roads
.
In terms of transportation, it is clear that
roads
are more available for folk to go to their destination and sometimes might be even cheaper than railroads. In railways, crowds cannot bring with them so many things, when if they want to populate another home in another part of the country. For example
, in China was a poll about this
question and approximately 80% of people
chose that roads
are more important for them, for the reason that I mentioned.
Roads
can be also
crucial for export needs like food
, clothes, and materials. These stuffs very necessary for all humanity and without them, they can not live just 3 days. For instance
, 5 years ago, when it was time of COVID-19, I know that in my town there was no food
in supermarkets, and it is due to
all cars and tracks that transported food
could not go anywhere, because the government closed all roads
for them.
In conclusion, some might believe that spending more money on railways will be good rather than giving it to make more qualitative roads
, but I do not think so, because people
's transportation and their properties are more transported on the roads
and products that require people
are also
export them with cars and tracks.Submitted by a.seytzhanova on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
Try to further develop your arguments with clearer examples and more detailed explanations. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and stay focused on it throughout the paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Work on sentence structure and grammar to enhance clarity. Avoid repetitiveness and ensure that sentences are logically linked to each other.
task achievement
The essay presents a clear position in the introduction and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
The ideas are organized into paragraphs, each containing a separate point.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!