Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads

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Some say that governments must give more money for building railways rather than
roads
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.
This
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essay totally disagrees with that statement, because
roads
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are the main transportation for
people
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and products like
food
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and clothes are exported mostly on the
roads
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. In terms of transportation,
it is clear that
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roads
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are more available for folk to go to their destination and sometimes might be even cheaper than railroads. In railways, crowds cannot bring with them so many things, when if they want to populate another home in another part of the country.
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, in China was a poll about
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question and approximately 80% of
people
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chose that
roads
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are more important for them, for the reason that I mentioned.
Roads
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can be
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crucial for export needs like
food
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, clothes, and materials. These stuffs very necessary for all humanity and without them, they can not live just 3 days.
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, 5 years ago, when it was time of COVID-19, I know that in my town there was no
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in supermarkets, and it is
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all cars and tracks that transported
food
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could not go anywhere, because the government closed all
roads
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for them. In conclusion, some might believe that spending more money on railways will be good rather than giving it to make more qualitative
roads
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, but I do not think so, because
people
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's transportation and their properties are more transported on the
roads
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and products that require
people
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are
also
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export them with cars and tracks.
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The essay presents a clear position in the introduction and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
The ideas are organized into paragraphs, each containing a separate point.

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  • Mass transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic growth
  • Regional development
  • Initial investment
  • Feasibility
  • Flexibility
  • Rural areas
  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Long-term investment
  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
  • Modal shift
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