You work at home a d have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your lettee Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your work Say waht you want the shop or compny to do?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my disappointment with the use of a laptop that I bought from your store on August 1, 2024. The order number is Qwery.
Moreover
, when I bought the laptop it was in good condition hence
, after few
days, I was not able to connect to the internet. It shows that there is no internet network but on other devices connection works very well. I checked the settings too, Correct article usage
a few
Correct word choice
and unfortunately
unfortunately
I found that there is Add a comma
unfortunately,
issue
with Add an article
an issue
this
device.
However
, I am a customer service representative who needs internet all the time to connect to calls but due to
this
issue for the past couple of days
I am not able to attend any queries. Add a comma
days,
Additionally
, I got many warnings from my employer. If this
obstacle remain
Change the verb form
remains
same
for the upcoming days, I can Correct article usage
the same
lost
my job.
To Change the verb form
lose
be lost
reckon
the issue, I would like to request Verb problem
address
to
you Change preposition
that
either
repair Correct word choice
apply
this
device if its
possible within one day Correct pronoun usage
apply
otherwise
I have no other option instead
of
returning.
Hopefully, you will take prompt action to resolve the problem. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Waris SaroyeChange preposition
to
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task achievement
Ensure that you provide specific details like the model of the laptop and more identifiable information for the order.
coherence cohesion
Work on improving your sentence structure and grammar for better clarity.
task achievement
You have clearly identified the problem with the equipment and how it affects your work.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and professional tone throughout.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with appropriate paragraphs and clear progression of ideas.
coherence cohesion
You included a greeting and a closing that fit the context of a formal letter.