Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this develomeng bring more advantages or disadvantages.

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level

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of

technology

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the world

have

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become a comfortable living space. Now many people believe that lots of activities which were done by

hands

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have shifted

machines

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. I think

it's

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its

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advantages

outwiegh

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outweigh

it's

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its

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disadvantages.

Firstly

,

this

develpoment

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development

has resulted in the benefit of man making him able to do tasks which were considered impossible in the past.

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, man

use

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to cultivate crops using simple digging tools or by

hands

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in some cases,

this

is now replaced by heavy machinery like tractors,mowers,harvesters etc. Another positive impact of

this

variation on people's

life

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is that it has

completly

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completely

changed their way of life making things more accessible.

For example

, before the

invetion

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invention

of mobile

phones

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phones,

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the only means of communication was

wrirting

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writing

letters.

This

way was overthrown by phones in

such

a way that now there are only

few

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post offices left in the world.

On the other hand

,

this

upgrade has some drawbacks as well causing unemployment with

machine

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machines

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taking jobs away from workers

destroying

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and destroying

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there

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their

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means of income. For

exmple

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example

many factories in America have bought

pakaging

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packaging

machines to speed up their production

while

leaving more than 20%

workers

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jobless. In conclusion, there are many people against

this

development but in my

opinion

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opinion,

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it has more positive impacts rather than negative ones.