The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the amount of stores that finished working and opened, from 2011 to 2018, in the particular country.
A glance at the graph makes it clear that the least closures belong to 2015, and the most began working in 2011.
According to
the markets that started opening, 2011, was by far the best year for them with 8500 new shops. However
, in 2012, this
amount decreased dramatically to 4000. Although
in 2013 and 2014, this
number increased significantly, it could never reach its first peak and even fell again in 2015, by 2000. Finally
, it stopped at 3000 in 2018.
Turning to the amount of closures, this
figure surpassed the number of openings from 2012 to 2014. Then
in 2014, two lines crossed with each other, and in 2015, the number of closings saw the biggest fall to nearly 100. Then
it rose again to 5000, and after that saw only a small increase in the last
three years.Submitted by mahtaesmailian on
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