The table in the above image shows the source of money for the police budget. The chart shows how it was spent. Both of these images capture data from the year 2017 to 2018.
The table illustrates the different supplies of
money
for the police income, whilst the pie charts display how it was spent between the years 2017 and 2018.
Overall
, the amount of total police budget was higher in 2018 than in 2017, whilst the proportion of the officers' salaries had a drop
.
The Wrong verb form
dropped
money
that came from national
government was the main source for the budget both in 2017 and 2018. It had an increase Correct article usage
the national
with
2.3 million pounds Change preposition
of
while
the money
coming from local taxes dramatically rose with
more Change preposition
by
over
than 10 million pounds in a year. It can be seen that there was almost Change preposition
apply
15
million pounds rise in total from 2017 to 2018.
Correct article usage
a 15
On the other hand
, salaries
of the officers and the staff had the biggest portion of spending Correct article usage
the salaries
money
in 2017. Building and transport, an
technological investments had the shares with 17% and 8% respectively in the same year. In 2018, wages kept Correct your spelling
and
its
first place even if Correct pronoun usage
their
it
declined by %6 to 69%. That 6% share of the budget was spent Correct pronoun usage
they
for
technology in 2018, whilst the percentage of Change preposition
on
money
spent for
buildings and transport remained Change preposition
on
the
same level at 17%.Change preposition
at the
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
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