The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
The line graph below compares the data on the number of people taking part in different categories of pastime activities at some social
centre
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in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020. It can be seen from the diagram that film
club
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remained the most popular
pastimes
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during the period. We can
also
note that
such
occupations as amateur dramatics and table tennis maintained the same level both being equally favoured at one time,
however
, the first pursuit decreased drastically becoming the least popular amongst others by the end of the period. In 2000 the most attended
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was the film club with more than 60 participants.
Whereas
table tennis, amateur dramatics and martial arts were considerably less liked compared to the film club with about 18, 27 and 37 people respectively. Unlike amateur dramatics, table tennis increased significantly, becoming
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second in popularity with 50 attendees by 2020. Throughout the period between 2005 and 2020 musical performances class was introduced growing moderately with about 11 people attending.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • participants
  • social centre
  • comparison
  • trends
  • consistently popular
  • gained popularity
  • lost popularity
  • community interest
  • availability of facilities
  • social factors
  • economic factors
  • external events
  • economic downturns
  • health crises
  • demographic changes
  • aging population
  • marketing
  • community outreach programs
  • participation rates
  • Melbourne
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