The bar chart shows the highest qualification attained by sex for the working age population in wales in 2001/2002 summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relavant. The bar chart shows the highest qualification attained by sex for the working age population in wales in 2001/2002 summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relavant.

The diagram provides information about the highest level of education that has been obtained by the

working age

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working-age

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population by gender in Wales during 2001/2002.

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, it can be seen that

majority

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the majority

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of the women

has

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obtained

grade

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grades

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A-C in GCSE or equivalent

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,

majority

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the majority

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of the male population has passed GCE A level or equivalent.

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, there are

considerable

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amount of female and male percentages with no qualifications at all. People with a degree or higher education are considerably low compared to other categories regardless of gender with both proportions being less than 15% and less than 10% respectively. Even though

that

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more men have passed educational exams, still there is

striking

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proportion of people with no education at all in Wales back in 2001/2002 with a percentage of 20%.

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, more women of the population are GCSE qualified and more men of the citizens are GCE A level passed

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more than 10% from both

gender

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genders

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are graduates.