The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
chart illustrates the number of three different crimes that occurred in New Port between 2003 and 2012.
Overall
, except for the numbers in 2004, whilst burglary
declined sharply, vehicle theft
and robbery fluctuated slightly over the period. Additionally
, burglary
overtook the car theft
in around 2007 and showed a sharp fall.
The number of burglaries was almost 3,500 in 2003. After 2003, it showed an escalation of almost 200 incidents, however
, it reversed and dropped drastically by 2008. From 2008 onward, incidents of burglary
varied slightly by 2012 and reached almost 1300 in 2012.
On the other hand
, car theft
and robbery were approximately 2750 and 700, respectively. From 2003 to 2005, they remained relatively stable. However
, car theft
fell significantly to almost 2000 in 2006. Meanwhile, the number of the stealers saw a slight drop. From 2008 onward, although
robbery was almost flat, burglary
experienced a small increase.Submitted by a.muratdemircan on
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