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the continued rise in the worlds population is greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. what are causes of this continued rise? do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

#rise #worlds #population #humanity #time
Latest statistics indicate that the
number
 of people living on
earth
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Earth
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 is around seven billion.
This
number
 is growing in a continuous fashion, caused by multiple reasons which form the most difficult
problem
 that a human faced ever.
This
 essay will discuss the causes and consequences of
this
 huge
problem
. There are several factors that lead to the
premanent
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permanent
increase
 in
population
.
for instance
, the
extending
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 of a human
life-time
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lifetime
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 which
led
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was led
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 by
the
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apply
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medical development. Another reason is the decrease in the death rate
as a result
 of
reducing
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the reduction
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 in the
number
 of wars.
furthermore
, rise in the average
number
 of
birth
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births
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 especially in third-world countries where each family have at least eight children. The infinite
increase
 in the world's
population
 is considered a real
Problem
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problem
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due to
it's
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its
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 painful consequences.
For example
, an enormous
increase
 in the government expenditure to satisfy the public needs.
Therefore
,
increase
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increases
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 the pressure on
government
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the government
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 to provide other resources of revenues to refund to public requirements, because every human has essential rights.
For instance
,
safe
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 home, clean food and
good
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a good
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 education. In fact, the growing
number
 of people on earth
have
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has
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indescribable
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an indescribable
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 impact on
enviromental
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environmental
 pollution and caused
a
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huge waste.
In addition
,
rise
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the rise
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 in
population
 produced
crowded
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a crowded
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 city and
create
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created
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the
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traffic
problem
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problems
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. In conclusion,
this
 issue has a lot of drawbacks,
on
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both
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the
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 government,
environment
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the environment
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 and even
on
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for
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 people themselves. In my opinion,
this
problem
 should be solved
through
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by
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 limiting the growth rate in
population
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the population
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 because I can see that it is the greatest
problem
 that humanity
have
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 to cope with.
Submitted by elafalgarni on

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grammar
Improve grammar and word choice, paying attention to aspects such as subject-verb agreement, pluralization, and article usage.
support
Provide more specific examples to support your points and elaborate on the consequences of overpopulation for more clarity.
coherence
Work on the logical flow between sentences and paragraphs to enhance coherence. Make sure one idea transitions smoothly to the next.
task response
The essay addresses both causes and consequences of the rise in global population.
structure
Clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
content
The essay recognizes the significance of government expenditure and environmental impact as key consequences.

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