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Stanadarized tests are the best way to assess students ability. Do you agree or disagree?

#tests #students #ability
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The pervasive influence of
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 abilities.
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 that standard
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 can assess
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students
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 academic skills. The essay will discuss
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 these
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 scores impact
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scholars
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 teaching abilities. One of the most compelling arguments in favour of standard
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 is that it's easy to
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interpret
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's score as the sole judgment of the
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’s ability. The number is only one point of data within an array of internal assessments across many subject areas that provide information on a
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’s learning progress. There are many cases where
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 have demonstrated
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 understanding
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 a subject or concept through various assessments, but aren’t as skilled at taking
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, it can be hard on a
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 if they feel that they didn’t perform
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 scenarios,
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 of determining the entire picture of learning through a review of all assessment data with their teachers, a
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 might determine their success based on a standardized
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 score
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, When standardized exams become all important in a school or district, it has a massive impact on teaching and learning. Educators frequently start “teaching to the
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” if they feel that their evaluations (and jobs) solely depend on how well
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 perform. Educators may
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 stop trying new techniques and teaching methods in the classroom. With every minute counting on the way to their
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’ next exam, teachers will worry that an untested method will backfire and their
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 will score worse than before.
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 in
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 standardized tests have introduced some complexities,
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task achievement
Your essay does a good job of addressing the topic and provides clear arguments against the use of standardized tests. However, you should provide more specific examples to support your points. For instance, mention specific studies or statistics about the impact of standardized tests on students' confidence or on teachers' teaching methods.
coherence cohesion
While your essay has a logical structure, several sentences contain grammatical errors or awkward phrasing (e.g., 'The pervasive influence of standarized tests have considered...'). Make sure to proofread your essay to correct these issues.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion that effectively summarize your main points.
task achievement
You address both the impact on students and teachers, making your argument well-rounded.

Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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