: The chart shows the average daily viewing figures for Channel One News over a 12-month period.

The line chart illustrates the

number

of channel one

viewers

in millions daily during

one

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a

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year

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one-year

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period.

Overall

,the

number

of people at 1 and 9;30

pm

remained the same during the given period,

while

the

number

of

viewers

at 6 and 11

pm

saw an increase and decrease. In January, the

number

of

viewers

at 6pm constituted the highest point, nearly 5 million at the beginning of the year.

Then

it started to

went

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down with sharp fluctuation until December.At 9;30

pm

, it suddenly started to increase,

then

from May to September it had a sharp dip,afterwards went up to the same

number

,3

millions

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.In May ,when the

number

of

viewers

contacted at 11pm appeared and experienced a rapid upward trend,

then

in August ,it went down making up more

viewers

than it was at the beginning approximately 1 million,respectively.

By contrast

,the amount of the audience, who preferred to watch at 1pm remained the same

during

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12 months.