: The chart shows the average daily viewing figures for Channel One News over a 12-month period.

The line chart illustrates the

number

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of channel one

viewers

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in millions daily during

one

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year

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one-year

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period.

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,the

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of people at 1 and 9;30

pm

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remained the same during the given period,

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the

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of

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at 6 and 11

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saw an increase and decrease. In January, the

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of

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at 6pm constituted the highest point, nearly 5 million at the beginning of the year.

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it started to

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down with sharp fluctuation until December.At 9;30

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, it suddenly started to increase,

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from May to September it had a sharp dip,afterwards went up to the same

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,3

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.In May ,when the

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of

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contacted at 11pm appeared and experienced a rapid upward trend,

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in August ,it went down making up more

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than it was at the beginning approximately 1 million,respectively.

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,the amount of the audience, who preferred to watch at 1pm remained the same

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for

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12 months.