The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

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for

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different activities at one social

center

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centre

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in Melbourne Australia over a

twenty -year

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twenty-year

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period

between 2000 and 2020.

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, it is

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seen that the number of participants, who visited

table

tennis and musical performances were a consistent increase,

while

demand for

amaleur

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amateur

dramatics declined significantly over the analyzed

period

. The

table

data obviously shows that at the beginning of the

period

close to 18 people visited in

table

tennis,

then

untill

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until

2010 increased slightly, from 2010 to 2020

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and reached approximately 56 numbers.

By

contrast

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the number of visitors

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to amaleur

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amaleur

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amateur

dramatics

were

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a steady decrease throughout the

ovserved

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observed

period

. If we look at

table

tennis and musical

performance

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performances

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were similar upward

trend

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trends

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. The number of participants

were

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roughly 75 collectively. Over the analyzed

period

visitors of film club and martial arts did not change. At the beginning of the

year

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year,

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it remained the same

at the end

of the year.