The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the manufacturing of various grains from the year 2010 to 2015 and
also
with
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a forecast for 2030.
Overall
, production of each type of
grains
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grain
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rose, albeit at
different
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a different
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rate. Barley showed the highest production among all the grains in a
20
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20-year
years
time period. Wheat had shown growth of five
million
metric
tons
in the first five
year
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years
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, going from 100
million
to 105
million
tons
in 2015.
However
, by 2030
also
, it is estimated to rise by another 5
million
only taking its manufacturing to 110
million
tons
. Barely started with only 50
million
tons
in 2010 but it doubled its production in 20
years
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time, with 100
million
in 2030. Maize
also
rose steadily with 34
million
in 2010. It
had shown
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a growth of half
million
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a million
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for the next ten
years
and again half
million
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a million
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for another ten
years
.
However
, rice in 2010 was at 24.7
million
it dropped slightly for
next
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the next
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five
years
. But, since
then
,
a
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constant growth
was
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has been
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seen and it is estimated that it will go to 25.5 by 2030.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, million, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • metric tons
  • trend
  • projected
  • notable
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • consistent
  • proportion
  • comparison
  • forecast
  • extrapolate
  • economic impact
  • environmental factors
  • yield
  • cultivation
  • sustainable
  • harvest
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sector
  • quantify
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