The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the manufacturing of various grains from the year 2010 to 2015 and
also
with
a forecast for 2030. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, production of each type of grains
rose, albeit at Fix the agreement mistake
grain
different
rate. Barley showed the highest production among all the grains in a Add an article
a different
20
Correct your spelling
20-year
years
time period.
Wheat had shown growth of five million
metric tons
in the first five year
, going from 100 Change to a plural noun
years
million
to 105 million
tons
in 2015. However
, by 2030 also
, it is estimated to rise by another 5 million
only taking its manufacturing to 110 million
tons
. Barely started with only 50 million
tons
in 2010 but it doubled its production in 20 years
time, with 100 Change noun form
years'
million
in 2030.
Maize also
rose steadily with 34 million
in 2010. It had shown
a growth of half Wrong verb form
showed
million
for the next ten Correct article usage
a million
years
and again half million
for another ten Correct article usage
a million
years
. However
, rice in 2010 was at 24.7 million
it dropped slightly for next
five Correct article usage
the next
years
. But, since then
, a
constant growth Correct article usage
apply
was
seen and it is estimated that it will go to 25.5 by 2030.Wrong verb form
has been
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