is an integral part of humans’ lives.
some people argue that, it is
who experience the highest level of joy in their
, others mention that despite
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have, they have
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lifestyle. I go
the first group’s view, and I will explore both views in the following essay.
with, the less stress
have, the more they are happy.
,
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of youngster are free from daily
and they have much more free time to do leisure activities
as playing games, through which they enjoy their moments.
, the level of interactions
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extremely high among
, resulting in
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circle of friends, with which teens can spend their days happily. Apart
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that
their position in families, they always have the family’s full support when they face predicaments. In my opinion,
these
they would experience lower
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of stress and anxiety, leading to a much more happier
.
, adult
would create more opportunities to enjoy
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because of being independent. It means that,
most
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would feel constrained by new
after leaving the nest, they acknowledge that there are various opportunities, through which they can seek what they desire.
, achieving the childhood dream can bring a deep sense of satisfaction
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. I believe, though,
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have
as
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their children
overwhelming situations like dealing with
expenses, they would not find
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permanent
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. Their responsibility to keep their children safe and happy,
, is a heavy burden on their shoulders and they always put their children over themselves.
In conclusion,
in some people’s
experience
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period in their
, others believe that people in their adulthood will have a happier
. In my opinion,
would not feel
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, unless their
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as
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.