Some people think that robots are very important to human's future development. Others think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both opinions and give your personal view.

Some believe that robots are extremely important to our future as individuals; others argue that as much as they are necessary, they are
also
dangerous and have negative effects on the community,
this
essay will analyse
this
topic from both points of view and express my opinion as well. On the one hand, the belief in the importance of robots, which held the idea that robots will make human life easier,
in other words
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coherence cohesion
Complete and structure your essay with a full introduction, body paragraphs, and a clear conclusion. An incomplete introduction disrupts the logical flow.
task achievement
Fully respond to the prompt, discussing both viewpoints on the impact of robots and providing specific examples or points for each view.
task achievement
Define your opinion clearly and support it with relevant examples and arguments. This will enhance the clarity of your ideas.
task achievement
The essay prompt is acknowledged, and the initial lines show an effort to address both perspectives.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • automation
  • precision
  • efficiency
  • production outputs
  • cost savings
  • innovation
  • medical outcomes
  • human error
  • exploration
  • hazardous environments
  • unemployment
  • economic disparity
  • ethical concerns
  • privacy
  • security
  • misuse
  • dependency
  • overreliance
  • social isolation
  • manual labor
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