The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The line graph shows urban
population
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growth in four
countries
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in Asia (
Philippines
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, Malaysia, Thailand, and
Indonesia
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) over five decades from 1970 to 2020, and the forecast until 2040.
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, the proportion of urban citizens rose over six decades and will continue growing in 2040.
Although
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Indonesia
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had the lowest
population
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living in cities in the first year, it is predicted to be the second country with the highest
city
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residents in 2040. In 1970, the
Philippines
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and Malaysia had the highest proportion of urban
population
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, accounting for around 32% and 30%, respectively. The number of urban residents in both
countries
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then
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experienced a moderate increase to around 35% in the
Philippines
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, surpassed by the Malaysian at 36% in 1990.
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in the
Philippines
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the figure will continue increasing to around 80% in 2040, the figure in Malaysia fluctuated before growing to around 50%
at the end
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. In terms of the two other
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, Thailand’s city
population
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made up just below one-fifth,
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in
Indonesia
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, the figures stood at just below Thailand’s in 1970. Over thirty years, the proportion of people that lived in cities in both
countries
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experienced a gradual growth to the same level at just below 30% in 2000.
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, the
population
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is predicted to peak at around 60% in
Indonesia
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and around 48% in Thailand in 2040.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, countries, philippines, indonesia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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