The bar charts below shows the prevalence of obesity among boys and girls aged 12 to 19 by ethnicity, in the United States for the years 2004 and 2014.
The charts provide the prevalence of
obesity
between males and females aged 12 to 19 based on ethnicity in the United States between the years of
2004 and 2014.
In general, it is obvious that in 2014, the Change preposition
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percentage
of people with obesity
increased in all three ethnicities compared to 2004 and non-
Hispanic
black girls
and Hispanic
boys each reached the highest percentage
among their generation.
In 2004 12 percent
of the adolescent non-
Hispanic
boys were classified as overweight. The percentage
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to 17 Correct your spelling
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percent
in 2014. Whereas
, 11 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
the
non_Hispanic black and 13 Correct article usage
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percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
the
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Hispanic
teenagers faced the same issue which rised
to 20 and 27 Correct your spelling
raised
rose
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percent
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per cent
repectively
in 2014.
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respectively
girls
, non-
Hispanic
white adolescents had the lowest percentage
of obesity
in both years, 9 and 14 percent
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per cent
respectievly
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respectively
However
non-
Hispanic
black girls
aged 12 to 19, had the highest percentage
of overweight teenagers in both years which reached from 16 percent
in 2004 to 29 percent
in 2014. Also
, 12 percent
of Hispanic
girls
were classified as overweight in 2004 and the percentage
went up to 17 percent
in 2014.
Overall
, more Hispanic
boys suffered from obesity
while
this
rate was higher among the non-
Hispanic
black girls
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