The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart compares families’ weekly
expenses
in a particular country in 1968 and 2018.
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Overall
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while
families spent most of their weekly income on food in 1968, leisure became the highest spending after five decades. Linking Words
Additionally
, families used the least proportion of their income on fuel and power in both given years.
In 1968, households spent a significant majority of their weekly salary on food, which accounted for 35%. Linking Words
However
, it experienced a dramatic fall to just above 15% in 2018. The housing Linking Words
and
clothing and footwear Correct word choice
apply
expenses
both stood at 10% in 1968. Five decades later, Use synonyms
while
the expense Linking Words
on
housing grew dramatically to just below one-fifth, for clothing and footwear, it decreased by 5%. Family spending on leisure doubled from just below 10% in 1968 to around 22% in 2018, exceeding their expense on food.
Regarding the other categories, both family Change preposition
of
expenses
on household Use synonyms
goods
, personal Use synonyms
goods
, and transport stood at around 8% and fuel and power accounted for approximately 6%. Use synonyms
Whereas
their spending on household Linking Words
goods
remained the same, for personal Use synonyms
goods
and fuel and power, they decreased to the same level at just below 5% in 2018. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, transport Linking Words
expenses
experienced a slight rise to around 14% in 2018.Use synonyms
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