The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart compares families’ weekly
expenses
in a particular country in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, while
families spent most of their weekly income on food in 1968, leisure became the highest spending after five decades. Additionally
, families used the least proportion of their income on fuel and power in both given years.
In 1968, households spent a significant majority of their weekly salary on food, which accounted for 35%. However
, it experienced a dramatic fall to just above 15% in 2018. The housing and
clothing and footwear Correct word choice
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expenses
both stood at 10% in 1968. Five decades later, while
the expense on
housing grew dramatically to just below one-fifth, for clothing and footwear, it decreased by 5%. Family spending on leisure doubled from just below 10% in 1968 to around 22% in 2018, exceeding their expense on food.
Regarding the other categories, both family Change preposition
of
expenses
on household goods
, personal goods
, and transport stood at around 8% and fuel and power accounted for approximately 6%. Whereas
their spending on household goods
remained the same, for personal goods
and fuel and power, they decreased to the same level at just below 5% in 2018. On the other hand
, transport expenses
experienced a slight rise to around 14% in 2018.Submitted by averinasandra on
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