The bar chart shows the results of the survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London thought of the city
The bar chart compares the outcomes of the survey conducted for three
years
to know the opinions about the range
of shops
, job opportunities , a mixture of people
, museums and art galleries , nightlife
and Transport
in London city .
Overall
, people
experienced a better life in the city in the first year
and the results decreased over time with minor fluctuations in some categories. despite the wholesome decline , the range
of shops
remained moderately stable . Nightlife
and transport
witnessed significant changes over the period given.
Firstly
,45% of people
tended to like the range
of shops
while
job opportunities and a mixture of people
were lower in percentage by 6% and 8% respectively . Entertainment such
as art galleries and nightlife
results showed that only around 20 to 25% per cent of people
were satisfied. Transport
was also
unfavourable by almost 25% per cent.
Additionally
, the range
of shops
slightly decreased to about 43% per cent then
rose again to 44% at last
. job opportunities dropped to 35% and remained stable in years
2 and 3 . The mixture of people
maintained stability in the first and second years
then
declined to 35% . Museums and art galleries kept growing throughout the years
and reached a peak of 27% in the third year
. Moreover
, nightlife
fluctuated from 25% in the first year
then
fell to 20% and rose again to 23% . Lastly
, transport
also
experienced fluctuation and reached a peak of 25% in the last
year
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