The bar chart shows the results of the survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London thought of the city
The bar chart compares the outcomes of the survey conducted for three
years
to know the opinions about the Use synonyms
range
of Use synonyms
shops
, job opportunities , a mixture of Use synonyms
people
, museums and art galleries , Use synonyms
nightlife
and Use synonyms
Transport
in London city .
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Overall
, Linking Words
people
experienced a better life in the city in the first Use synonyms
year
and the results decreased over time with minor fluctuations in some categories. despite the wholesome decline , the Use synonyms
range
of Use synonyms
shops
remained moderately stable . Use synonyms
Nightlife
and Use synonyms
transport
witnessed significant changes over the period given.
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Firstly
,45% of Linking Words
people
tended to like the Use synonyms
range
of Use synonyms
shops
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while
job opportunities and a mixture of Linking Words
people
were lower in percentage by 6% and 8% respectively . Entertainment Use synonyms
such
as art galleries and Linking Words
nightlife
results showed that only around 20 to 25% per cent of Use synonyms
people
were satisfied. Use synonyms
Transport
was Use synonyms
also
unfavourable by almost 25% per cent.
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Additionally
, the Linking Words
range
of Use synonyms
shops
slightly decreased to about 43% per cent Use synonyms
then
rose again to 44% at Linking Words
last
. job opportunities dropped to 35% and remained stable in Linking Words
years
2 and 3 . The mixture of Use synonyms
people
maintained stability in the first and second Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
then
declined to 35% . Museums and art galleries kept growing throughout the Linking Words
years
and reached a peak of 27% in the third Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
nightlife
fluctuated from 25% in the first Use synonyms
year
Use synonyms
then
fell to 20% and rose again to 23% . Linking Words
Lastly
, Linking Words
transport
Use synonyms
also
experienced fluctuation and reached a peak of 25% in the Linking Words
last
Linking Words
year
.Use synonyms
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