The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
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The floor plan illustrates the development of the public library now compared to 20 years ago. Over the twenty years, there have been replacements of
room
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allocations with the removal of tables and chairs and the addition of new amenities.
While
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the entrance remains, the tables and chairs which
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placed in
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front of it have been removed, making the hallway vacant until the back of the library.
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the left
side
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, the reading
room
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has been changed into
computer
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the computer
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room
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,
while
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the adult fiction
books
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section
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has been relocated to the right
side
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, making it the
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for all reference
books
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. Beside it, the
room
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for CDs, videos, and computer games has been developed into a children’s
room
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, consisting of children’s fiction
books
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, two sofas, and space for storytelling events which
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expanded. On the right
side
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, the enquiry desk has been relocated to the next
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of it with an adjustment in size, making the way for a café to be developed. Next to it is a series of self-service machines alongside a new information desk and adult fiction
books
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which was a
section
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for adult non-fiction
books
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20 years ago. Near to it is a lecture
room
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which formerly was a children’s
books
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section
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Linking words: Add more linking words.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, side, books, section with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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