The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
The floor plan illustrates the development of the public library now compared to 20 years ago. Over the twenty years, there have been replacements of
room
allocations with the removal of tables and chairs and the addition of new amenities.
While
the entrance remains, the tables and chairs which was
placed in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
the
front of it have been removed, making the hallway vacant until the back of the library. Correct article usage
apply
In
the left Change preposition
On
side
, the reading room
has been changed into computer
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the computer
a computer
room
, while
the adult fiction books
section
has been relocated to the right side
, making it the section
for all reference books
. Beside it, the room
for CDs, videos, and computer games has been developed into a children’s room
, consisting of children’s fiction books
, two sofas, and space for storytelling events which got
expanded.
On the right Verb problem
has
side
, the enquiry desk has been relocated to the next side
of it with an adjustment in size, making the way for a café to be developed. Next to it is a series of self-service machines alongside a new information desk and adult fiction books
which was a section
for adult non-fiction books
20 years ago. Near to it is a lecture room
which formerly was a children’s books
section
.Submitted by aribawadzaki on
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