The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The chart shows information about changes in ways of travel between the years 1985 and 2000
Overall
, cars have the highest rate in both years; the opposite is taxis, which generally show the lowest rate in number.
However
, the train comes after cars in number, and between 1985 and 2000, all modes show an increase. Beginning with, in 1985 the cars which hold the highest rate were 3199, and it increased to 4806 in 2000, the second in number is the train in 1985 was 289 and went up to 366 in 2000, the local bus
although
it was 429 in 1985, it decreased and became 274 in 2000,
also
what shows a decrease is a bicycle from 51 to 41 in 2000.
Moreover
, taxis rose from 13 to 42, and long-distance buses opposite the local bus jumped in 1985 was 54 and became 124 in 2000, eventually,the walking went down a little from 255 to 237 in 2000.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • mode of travel
  • popularity
  • decline/increase
  • public transport
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • economic factors
  • environmental impact
  • urban planning
  • technological advancements
  • data points
  • trend
  • usage
  • comparison
  • implications
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