Write about the following topic: Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals agree that

home

is

best

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the best

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place for offspring development in case of learning,

while

, some people

thought

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that it is important for

children

to do schooling. Both of these

methofs

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methods

have pros and

i

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I

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will share my opinion in the essay below.

Firstly

, parents

plays

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a major role in

child's

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a child's

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development.

Children

learn what they see.

Home

is the best place for

children

to learn things before they get into the proper school.

Additionally

,

parents

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attention is a key to

children

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children's

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successful

life

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lives

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.

For instance

, research

have

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been shown that

,

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kids who get teaching from their homes are more confident rather than those kids who do not get teaching from their homes.

For example

, in China, 7

year

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is

minimum

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the minimum

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age for admission in

schools

. The reason behind

this

is that

children

can learn basic manners from their

home

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homes

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before

get

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getting

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into any institute.

As a result

, students

shows

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more creativity and discover new things which

world

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the world

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can now praise in China.

Secondly

, there is no doubt that school has

enormous

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impact on

childrens

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children's

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life. From analytics, it can be clearly seen that

,

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more than 55%

young

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of young

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kids did not appear in

schools

.

Due to

this

, oppression and terrorism among various communities

has

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been increasing daily.

Schools

are the places where

childrens

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children

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can communicate with each other, learn new things,

defeat

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and defeat

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the caste system, they all are class fellows regardless of their color, community etc. To

illustrates

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illustrate

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, honour killing, terrorism, murders and rapes are common in those countries where early schooling

are

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is

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not very common .

Such

as

many

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in many

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middle eastern

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Middle Eastern

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and

asian

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Asian

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countries where early schooling cannot be seen as an important thing and many people are

anaware

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unaware

aware

of

them

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this

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. So, school is important for

children

beacause

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because

it can create peace in society and reduce ignorance. In conclusion,

childrens

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children

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who get teaching

from

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at

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their

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apply

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home

is

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are

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more confident in comparison to other students before joining any institute. China is the best example of

this

view.

On the other hand

,

schools

plays

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a crucial role not only in

students

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students'

student's

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life

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lives

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but

also

good for surrounding people. Because it

make

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makes

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society peaceful.