Nowadays most
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individuals choose to
work
after retirement. Some argue that continuing to earn
money
for living in old
age
is a good choice,
therefore
they will be independent financially.
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believe they should enjoy their golden
age
by making memories and
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generation in the
work
field. In my
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old
age
.
Longer working lives, harm both, society and themselves. Being an employee demands physical and mental energy. They
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wake up every day morning at a specific time and
then
work
hard to
gain
profits for the company and themselves.
Additionally
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environment has
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and downs meaning, the incomes and
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outcomes increase and
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over the
year
and
this
will cause stress to the worker thinking
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they will get their salary in time.
For instance
, my 55
year
old Math teacher got
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attack and died
last
year
. Individuals in old
age
do not withstand
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.
On the other hand
, there is the danger that an older workforce will hinder the development of young talent if they are not allowed sufficient
work
opportunities.
For instance
, my brother went
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company to seek
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a proper job. He was
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to write his
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journal by working in the same field but
they recommended that he can be
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a
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year
old accounting manager. In
this
the young generation will
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their chance to improve
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that they studied.
Among the advantages, being able to
gain
money
from their own hard
work
alongside being active by doing positive activities
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also
helps them to be less
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burden for their family and government.
However
, it could be argued that they can
gain
money
through publishing a small business alongside their family.
For instance
, my grandfather has retired for 3 years now. He has a small
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his home town. The business was published by him and my grandmother in order to be happy beside each other and
also
gain
money
for the living without needing
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help.
To conclude
, people are living longer and
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number continue working
while
they are beyond retirement.
Although
there are advantages to that, I believe that they outweigh the drawbacks.