The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows a comparison of average weekly
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the percentage
percentage
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percentages
for
average Change preposition
of
families
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families'
family's
income
through week
in one country from 1968 to 2018
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the week
a week
overall
, it is clear that
,
Families in the the two years spent equal money Remove the comma
apply
in
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on
householld
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household
goods
. However
, the payment for clothing deacresed
by twofold in 2018.
In 1968, Food was very higher proportion Correct your spelling
decreased
from
other Spending in the Change preposition
to
week
. while
,
Housing Remove the comma
apply
income
was 10% through
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throughout
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the
week
. Fuel and power and clothing and footware
were approximately 6% and 5% respectively. Household Correct your spelling
footwear
goods
, personal goods
and transport were same
percentage almost 8%. The weekly Change the article
the same
income
for Leisure was 90% by
families in that period.
After 50 years the weekly spending for Change preposition
of
population
was Add an article
the population
dafferent
. In 2018, Correct your spelling
different
Citizins
spent their money for food almost 17%. the Correct your spelling
citizens
income
level of housing and clothing and footwear was 19% and 10% respectively. whilst the familites
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families
income
for fuel and power and personl
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personal
goods
was equal about 4%. The payment through week
was Add an article
the week
same
value Correct article usage
the same
with
past time. Transport Change preposition
as
in
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apply
this
year increased lightly
to 14%.whilst Leisure jumped significantly to 22% fromCorrect your spelling
slightly
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the
income
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