The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
The table shows the
length
of daylight
and temperature
of two different countries during the same period of weekend in December 2018.
Overall
, London
and Sydney
have opposite season
during the same weekend in December 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
seasons
London
experienced winter, whereas
Sydney
encounter
summer.
The Wrong verb form
encountered
temperature
and length
of daylight
in the two cities shows
contrastly different. Verb problem
are
London
with its cold temperature
shows fluctuation on
Change preposition
in
both
maximum and minimum temperature
with the highest Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
at
Saturday and Friday at the lowest. Change preposition
on
Then
differences can be seen clearly in Sydney
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
encounter
Correct subject-verb agreement
encounters
Correct article usage
a gradually
gradually
rise in its Change the word
gradual
temperature
which is Sunday at 31 degree
and 19 Change to a plural noun
degrees
degree
respectively.
Change to a plural noun
degrees
In addition
, the length
of the daylight
also
face
the same trend in Change the verb form
faces
both
cities. Sydney
experienced much longer daylight
contrastly
to Correct your spelling
contrast
London
. Sun in the
Correct article usage
apply
sydney
Change the capitalization
Sydney
rise
earlier than in Change the verb form
rises
London
, which is 5 am and 8 am respectively. On the other hand
, the sun set earlier in London
which is around five hours difference. However
, both
countries encounter Correct article usage
a gradually
gradually
rise in sunrise and sunset Change the word
gradual
time
Fix the agreement mistake
times
in
the weekend.
With the Change preposition
at
comparation
of these two cities, Correct your spelling
comparison
i
conclude that Change the capitalization
I
both
of them have more differences rather than similarities especially
in terms of Add the comma(s)
, especially
temperature
and length
of daylight
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Vocabulary: Replace the words length, daylight, temperature, london, sydney, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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