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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
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The table shows the
length
 of
daylight
 and
temperature
 of two different countries during the same period of weekend in December 2018.
Overall
,
London
 and
Sydney
 have opposite
season
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seasons
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 during the same weekend in December 2018.
London
 experienced winter,
whereas
Sydney
encounter
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 summer. The
temperature
 and
length
 of
daylight
 in the two cities
shows
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are
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 contrastly different.
London
 with its cold
temperature
 shows fluctuation
on
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in
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both
 maximum and minimum
temperature
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temperatures
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 with the highest
at
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on
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 Saturday and Friday at the lowest.
Then
 differences can be seen clearly in
Sydney
that
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which
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encounter
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encounters
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a gradually
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gradually
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 rise in its
temperature
 which is Sunday at 31
degree
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degrees
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 and 19
degree
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degrees
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 respectively.
In addition
, the
length
 of the
daylight
also
face
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 the same trend in
both
 cities.
Sydney
 experienced much longer
daylight
contrastly
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contrast
 to
London
. Sun in
the
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apply
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sydney
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Sydney
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rise
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 earlier than in
London
, which is 5 am and 8 am respectively.
On the other hand
, the sun set earlier in
London
 which is around five hours difference.
However
,
both
 countries encounter
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a gradually
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gradually
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gradual
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 rise in sunrise and sunset
time
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times
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in
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at
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 the weekend. With the
comparation
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comparison
 of these two cities,
i
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I
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 conclude that
both
 of them have more differences rather than similarities
especially
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, especially
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 in terms of
temperature
 and
length
 of
daylight
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words length, daylight, temperature, london, sydney, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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