The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The pie chart displays the volume of Coco-Cola sold in different parts of the world in 2000
whereas
the line graph shows the fluctuations in its
share
price from 1996 to 2001.
Overall
,
America
had the largest sales volume with North
America
being significantly higher than any other region in 2000. The
share
price experienced considerable growth over the
6 year
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period. It can be clearly seen in the first graph that North
America
accounted for nearly a third of the total sales volume of 17.1 billion, dominating the market in 2000.
This
was closely followed by Latin
America
which sold just over a quarter making it the second largest in proportion. Europe and Asia’s sales were roughly a fifth of the
overall
share
each. Africa and the Middle East sold the lowest quantity with just 7% of the total proportion. The
share
price almost doubled from around $35 in 1996 to nearly $80 in 1998 with a slight drop in between. It dropped dramatically from
this
peak to just below $50 in 2000 and went on to fluctuate a bit before reaching roughly $60 in 2001.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuations
  • market share
  • geographic distribution
  • revenue
  • financial performance
  • quarterly reports
  • shareholder
  • economic indicators
  • consumer behavior
  • aggregate data
  • profit margins
  • fiscal period
  • trend analysis
  • variance
  • growth rate
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