the line graph illustrates the amout of spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007, in grams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant
The line graph gives information about the amount of spread
consumption
between 1981 and 2007. Overall
, the consumption
of butter
and margarine decreased significantly, and the consumption
of low fat
and reduced spreads increased greatly.
Add a hyphen
low-fat
Butter
was the most popular fat at the beginning of the period, and consumption
reached a peak of about 160 grams
in 1986. After
this
, there was a sharp decline, and butter
consumption
reached the
lowest point of around 50 Change the word
its
grams
in 2007. The consumption
of margarine began lower than that of butter
, at 90 grams
. Following
this
, in 1991, it stood at exactly 100 grams
, the same as butter
. After 1996, margarine consumption
also
decreased gradually and was the lowest in 2007, at 40 grams
.
Low–fat spreads were introduced in 1996. In the next 11 years, their consumption
rose sharply to reach a peak of more than 80 grams
in 2001 and then
declined slightly to roughly 70 grams
in the year 2007.Submitted by xuando472002 on
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