the line graph illustrates the amout of spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007, in grams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant

the line graph illustrates the amout of spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007, in grams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant
The line graph gives information about the amount of spread
consumption
between 1981 and 2007.
Overall
, the
consumption
of
butter
and margarine decreased significantly, and the
consumption
of
low fat
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and reduced spreads increased greatly.
Butter
was the most popular fat at the beginning of the period, and
consumption
reached a peak of about 160
grams
in 1986.
After
this
, there was a sharp decline, and
butter
consumption
reached
the
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lowest point of around 50
grams
in 2007. The
consumption
of margarine began lower than that of
butter
, at 90
grams
.
Following
this
, in 1991, it stood at exactly 100
grams
, the same as
butter
. After 1996, margarine
consumption
also
decreased gradually and was the lowest in 2007, at 40
grams
. Low–fat spreads were introduced in 1996. In the next 11 years, their
consumption
rose sharply to reach a peak of more than 80
grams
in 2001 and
then
declined slightly to roughly 70
grams
in the year 2007.
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