Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In today’s world,

people

tend to choose

alternative

treatments

and medications to ensure they gain a healthy condition with less

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and low

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cost.

However

,

this

option leads to several drawbacks.

Firstly

,

people

are not only willing to have a healthy life, but

also

an instant process to get that state of health,

thus

they seek

for

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alternative

treatments

.

However

,

alternative

medications and

treatments

require unprofessional or amateur healthy workers.

Therefore

,

instead

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the right

diagnose

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and medication based on scientific

knowledges

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and skills, they depict their

patients

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patient's

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condition based on their experiences and assumptions. Take,

for example

, in Indonesia, herbal medication for tonsils

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to be popular,

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people

get a suggestion to consume frozen drinks and foods to heal their disease.

On the other hand

,

people

are trying to

minimalize

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their medication budget,

therefore

they are looking for

alternative

treatments

.

Consequently

, they need to face some

treatments

that lack

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high quality’s

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machines and traditional

treatments

.

Subsequently

, whether gain a healthy condition, they are susceptible to get mistreatment.

For instance

, there is an upward trend

due to

miscarriage, because some

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pregnancy

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moms in

the

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rural

area

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choose midwives to

get

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their baby birth, which

have lack

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of

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appropriate tools. In conclusion,

although

alternatives

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treatments

and medications can help patients to get

treatments

instantly and

cheap

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, they still serve several drawbacks that can make

patients

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conditions more severe than before.