Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In today’s world,
people
tend to choose alternative
treatments
and medications to ensure they gain a healthy condition with less stressful
and low Replace the word
stress
in
cost. Change preposition
apply
However
, this
option leads to several drawbacks.
Firstly
, people
are not only willing to have a healthy life, but also
an instant process to get that state of health, thus
they seek for
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apply
alternative
treatments
. However
, alternative
medications and treatments
require unprofessional or amateur healthy workers. Therefore
, instead
giving
the right Change preposition
of giving
diagnose
and medication based on scientific Replace the word
diagnosis
knowledges
and skills, they depict their Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
patients
condition based on their experiences and assumptions. Take, Change to a genitive case
patient's
patients'
for example
, in Indonesia, herbal medication for tonsils is seem
to be popular, Wrong verb form
seems
which
Correct word choice
and
people
get a suggestion to consume frozen drinks and foods to heal their disease.
On the other hand
, people
are trying to minimalize
their medication budget, Verb problem
minimise
therefore
they are looking for alternative
treatments
. Consequently
, they need to face some treatments
that lack of
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apply
high quality’s
machines and traditional Add a hyphen
high-quality’s
treatments
. Subsequently
, whether gain a healthy condition, they are susceptible to get mistreatment. For instance
, there is an upward trend due to
miscarriage, because some of
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apply
pregnancy
moms in Replace the word
pregnant
the
rural Correct article usage
apply
area
choose midwives to Fix the agreement mistake
areas
get
their baby birth, which Verb problem
give
have lack
Wrong verb form
lacks
of
appropriate tools.
In conclusion, Change preposition
apply
although
alternatives
Change the noun form
alternative
treatments
and medications can help patients to get treatments
instantly and cheap
, they still serve several drawbacks that can make Change the word
cheaply
patients
conditions more severe than before.Change noun form
patients'
patient's
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