The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the figure of
families
by their yearly earning
in 2007, 2011 and 2015 in the United States of America.
Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
Overall
, households
in all income categories, except from $
50,000-$74,999 category, fluctuated throughout the given period.
Correct article usage
the $
Began
at 25 Wrong verb form
Beginning
million
in 2007, families
with income less than $25,000 increased to around $28 million
in 2011 and dropped to approximately 27 million
in 2015. Similarly
, households
with
earning between $25.0000-$49.000 grew to 30 Change preposition
apply
million
in 2011 from around 26 million
in 2007, followed by a dip to approximately 28 million
in 2015.
While
households
with $50,000-$74,999 in earning
plateaued at just above 20 Correct your spelling
earnings
million
from 2007 to 2015, the
Correct article usage
apply
families
from $75,000-$99,999 and above $100,000 were not. Stood just below 15 million
, households
with income $75,000-$99,999 dipped to around 14 million
in 2011 but climbed to 15 million
in 2015. Likewise
, families
earning above $100,000 decreased in 2011 at
around 28 Change preposition
to
million
from almost 30 million
in 2007. However
, the number skyrocketed to around 33 million
in 2015.Submitted by aribawadzaki on
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