The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the key stages of how
glass
can be recycled.
Overall
, there are five main procedures in the recycling process of glass
which begin when it is thrown in the recycling bin until it is sent back to the supermarket.
Firstly
, glass
is thrown into the green recycle bin that can be found in the dumping ground near the residential areas or offices. Once the glass
has been collected by the recycling lorry, it is then
sent to the treatment plant. After the used material has arrived at the plant, it is washed and sterilised in an automated machine to be cleaned.
When the sterilising and washing stages have been completed, the glass
is then
sent to the next stations which involve crushing and melting. The glass
is crushed and melted into liquid form for the moulding step. Subsequently
, it is moulded into various kinds of shapes depending on the type of product. Finally
,the recycled material is picked up by the delivery lorry.Submitted by alisyashazzy on
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