Some people argue that to make healthy foods like fruits and vegetables more affordable, they should be subsidised by the government. Others believe that it is better to tax unhealthy foods. Discuss both views and give your option.

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more expensive and should be supported by the

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the level of nutrients for individuals

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different ages .

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assume that to reduce the amount of unhealthy products the

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the

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buy

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unhealthy

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to pay the

tax

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is what are the most effective solutions to increase the number of healthy

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purchases and reduce the amount of unhealthy

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in markets and

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seller shops

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issue .Nowadays healthy

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effort

of buying

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society .There are many reasons to support

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,one of these reasons the procedure of

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vegetable

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and

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time and money

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the type of

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soil is difficult to find and

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a huge number of

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to complete the final procedure,all of these steps cause a high cost for manufacture .

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, to solve

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issues

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the

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should support the

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is

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responsible for

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fruit

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and vegetables in order to reduce the huge cost on the

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and attract the people to buy healthy products. Some

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are opinion

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that to reduce the number of unhealthy

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food

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foods

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the

authority

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should obligation the

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to pay

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tax

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sell

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junk

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in the

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solution may

be help

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to motivate the

companies

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to avoid the

tax

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and obtain

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subsidies

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from

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government

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in case available the fruits and vegetables in the

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. In conclusion, assuming the

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on

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which buy unhealthy will attract

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and people to buy

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healthy

food

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