The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts show the differences in the expenditure habits of individuals from 1971 to 2001 in the UK.
Overall
, the trend shows a change in some categories such
as Cars which increased and Food was the opposite.
In 1971, Food was standing there at 44% in all categories which was the highest percentage. Then
, followed by cars with one and a half per cent difference was 22% while
petrol and furniture were only 10%. In Addition
, restaurants, books, furniture, and computers only took place in below 10% where computers becoming the lowest stuff that people buy that was 2%.
In Contrast
, in 2001, the number of cars and restaurants expenditure rose almost
50% Change preposition
by almost
by
43% and 14% each. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, computers became item
that Add an article
an item
gradual increase
to 12%. Meanwhile, some items Replace the word
gradually increased
were decrease
Change the verb form
were decreased
such
as petrol, furniture, and books by less than 5%. However
, the percentage of Food consumption sharply fall
to 14 Wrong verb form
fell
that
was the biggest Correct pronoun usage
which
dropped
.Replace the word
drop
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