The chart gives information about the average annual water consumption in kilolitre per property in Australian cities, namely Sydney, Perth, Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne and Canberra for last year, with the pie chart that shows the distribution of Australian water consumption by the year 2014.
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The bar graphs illustrate the average yearly
water
usage in different cities
(Sydney, Perth, Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne, and Canberra) in Australia last
year. The pie chart displays the percentage of sectors using water
in 2014.
Overall
, the six cities
in Australia had water
consumption between 150 and 300 kilolitres
per property in 2014, while
the biggest distributor was agriculture.
Firstly
, the least water
user cities
were Canberra and Melbourne with just under 150 kilolitres
and just over 150 kilolitres
per property respectively. The highest amount of using
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water
was in Perth that
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the
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in the
last
two cities
. Brisbane had 250 kilolitres
of water
consumption, while
Sydney had 200 kilolitre
per property. Change to a plural noun
kilolitres
Moreover
, Adelaide was between these cities
with around 225 kilolitres
of water
usage.
On the other hand
, agriculture was the main sector in consumption distribution with 67%, while
the nearest second sector was households with only 2%. Water
supply and electricity had the same amount with 7% of distribution, while
other industries and manufacturing had 4% each.Submitted by bloodylady on
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