task 1 the diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates the
process
of producing ethanol
, a type of biofuel, from plants
and other organic materials.
The process
begins with plants
, which grow using sunlight and carbon
dioxide
. These plants
are harvested and then
undergo a pre-processing stage where they are broken down. During this
step, the organic materials are converted into cellulose, which is a key component in the production of ethanol
.
Next,
the cellulose is processed into sugars, which are then
combined with microbes to facilitate fermentation. The fermentation process
results in the creation of ethanol
. Once ethanol
is produced, it is transported for various uses, such
as fueling vehicles, planes, and other forms of transport.
Throughout the process
, carbon
dioxide
is released during different stages, including plant growth, processing, and ethanol
usage in vehicles. This
creates a cycle where carbon
dioxide
is absorbed by plants
and released back into the atmosphere.
Overall
, the diagram outlines a continuous cycle in the production of ethanol
, showing the key stages involved, from plant growth to its eventual use as a fuel, while
highlighting the carbon
dioxide
exchanges involved in the process
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, ethanol, plants, carbon, dioxide with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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